Treatment Draft Two

John Mc’Giningham is a 21 year old from London, his mother’s name is Linda who owns her own hairdresser’s in Bermondsey. His father Craig abandoned John ,his mother and his brother at a very tender and critical time for the family. Consequently John missed that father figure in the house, throughout his school life he was bullied and tormented about his lack of physicality and self confidence. John was very unpopular and saw school as torture. Even his few friends made fun by calling him ‘Twiggy G’. Even at home he was looked done upon by his older brother Chris the opposite to him and his mother Linda. Suffering from kidney problems since the age of 21 Linda finally recives a letter from the NHS warning that she might need a kidney doner as both kidneys of hers had failed and need to continue having her series of dialysis. She first tells the eldest brother as she feel that him being the 'stongest' character mentally and physical he may be able to consolse her and also agree to check if him and her has the compatible blood type. However shockingly he refuses to hear it and is to scared to allow a chance to see if he could be her doner, instead of asking her younger son who she feels may not be able to handle the news nor help her she decides to face this alone even though John has heard the whole coversation while listening in the corridor. John decides to take this  matter into his own hands and in secret goes to the hospital to check if he does have to blood type to help his mum, succesfully finding out that he does he donates a kidney to his mother. We see her recieving the letter and cries tears of joy, we then see John in the corner smiling. She never finds out that John donated the kindey and he proves to be more of a man than his elder brother. John feels proud of himself and knows that this action has powered up his manhood and because he is physically weak he knows that he is strong minded and also great hearted to do such a big move that his older borther couldnt do for his brother.